Monday, February 22, 2016

3...2...1...GO!! I started racing down the huge hill. I can see the rough, bumpy path ahead of me. I can also hear the huge crowd around me. The taste in my mouth was very dry, my heart was racing like a puma pouncing - it was amazing! I could see the blue sky and there was a helicopter up above me. I just hit the finish line in a flash. By Eliana

2 comments:

  1. Wow Eliana, what amazing descriptive writing. I enjoyed reading that.

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  2. That clip was amazing! Great writing too :)

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